Monday, November 8, 2010

Very tired right now

I did 1600 words today which is a good start to the week.  Unfortunately I don't feel great about those 1600 words.  Today I ran into... kind of a block  My characters are traveling to a point of interest and I have a few events planned for them.  But... I need to establish some new characters and I'm... quite frankly I'm very terrible at dialogue and planning some sort of... bonding time I guess.  It's just bad.  So what I did is I skipped all the stuff that would introduce the characters and make them valuable (Some characters die fairly early in my story, so I need to make the reader care about them first, that is the issue I'm having problems with).  I rushed through a lot of the action events to try and get something down because if I waited until I worded everything just right I'd be sitting there staring at my screen forever.

So now I have a framework down that I'll have to fix up a lot when I go through the rewrite.  Frankly I need to learn how to do a few things for the rewrite (as I am rapidly discovering).  My settings leave so much to be desired atm.  I have certain scenes and moments that just flow so well and read well too.  But everything in between just... hurts to read.  I'm glad I made 1600 words today and I hope to do 2000 tomorrow but... the week has just begun.  Sorry for excessive ellipse usage, I just do that in stream of consciousness mode.

Oh yah no new excerpt because my stuff today wasn't very good.  Maybe I'll polish it a little tomorrow, or maybe I won't.  We'll see.

Word Count: 7,698

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