I'm still editing but I feel a lot better about this passage. It still needs just a little bit of care for me to call it done but I'm hoping I can start finishing the encounter up (this battle isn't even all the way over, I was just really dissatisfied with how it was shaping up). It's not perfect but at least there is a framework there I can be proud of that I can go back and touch up... not straight up rewrite.
Not a lot on the word count front, only 300 words or so. I procrastinated a lot again which really contributed to this. If I can finish the WHOLE encounter up tomorrow I will count it as a success. I hope to have another excerpt up tomorrow, though it may be a bit rough. I'm not going at the speed I need to finish 50,000 but this scene was valuable to me and I couldn't just leave it as it was.
Also, I would like to thank you, Josi and Lauren for reading my blog and leaving comments. They really help motivate me. Thank you for reading my blog.
Word Count: 9408
I'm glad it helps. Keep in mind, even if you don't finish the NaNo goal, you're at least making great progress that probably wouldn't have happened without pushing yourself to try for this goal!
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